Monday, March 4, 2019

We are so proud of our writing we are using a capital to start, finger spaces between words and a full stop to finish.

15 comments:

  1. Great work boys! Awesome to see your work on the blog Josh!

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  2. Awesome work guys developing your written language skills!

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  3. How wonderful to see such happy faces. It is great how writing our ideas makes us happy. It is great when we can share our ideas. Brilliant work!

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    1. Thank you Mr Robertson, writing makes us happy because we are trying our best and we can see that we are amazing at writing when we try our best!

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  4. Marvellous! Thumbs up for your great writing boys. So nice to see Sean's progressing so well in writing his thoughts. Such a great spelling too.Well done 😊

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    1. Great! Thanks for your comment Mum. I also think I'm a good speller, love from Sean!

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  5. Hi there Te Pihinga, My name is Abby and I am a year 7 at your school.

    I like the way you guys explained what work you were doing and included pictures.

    This reminds me of the time I learned how to do all of the those things.

    Maybe next time you could say what might have been most challangeing.

    Are you guys excited to do some more writing?

    Kind Regards,
    Abby.

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    1. Hi Abby, thanks for your comment. Some of us are excited to do some more writing. We find it challenging sometimes if we don't know what to write about and Leo say's sometimes he is just a bit tired.
      Have a great day Abby.
      From Te Pihinga!

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  6. hello te pihinga I am loving the capital letters and how you think the pool
    is awasome next time you could try full stops and sentences
    next time you could also try doing paragraphs
    kind regards brayden

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  7. dear tp clas it looks exciting .what is your next idea .from max

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  8. Hey TP!
    Its Chloe from Rimu Class room.
    Wow they are doing so good with there learning. I remember when I started to learn how to use Capital letters and full stops. Wow you (Teacher) must be so proud of your class. I bet they will be amazing when they grow up. I bet they are excited for next time doing writing!
    They look so happy to be able to do some writing.

    Kind Regards
    Chloe
    BYE!

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  9. hi TP I love this because it shows hard work. You're is it so important to your finger space?
    from connor

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  10. Hello Te Pihinga, I am Mia from Rimu class. It's nice to see you keeping up with your amazing writing skills! You guys have mastered it! It's so nice to see the young ones learning about the skills in writing. I'm sure that they will be amazing writers in the future! What's your next step in Writing?

    Bye!
    Mia

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